Snippet of Chapter 1..
I'm working on a book. Here's a snippet of Chapter 1, should I continue?
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In a state of bewilderment and
confusion, I raised my tiresome head from the charred remains of
corpses that plagued the ground below me. Regaining my thoughts of
where I am, obstructed, momentarily, the sea of deformed skeletons
that laid below. My recollection of events prior to my abrupt
awakening were blurred and sporadically interrupted by the repugnant
stench of rotting flesh that occupied the sinister surroundings,
reminiscent of industrial pollution that pervades London town. After
the mist of bemusement began to dissipate, the shadowy environment
became clear. It became apparent that I was being overshadowed by an
eerie Gothic Church, meticulously engraved in an alien language
unbeknownst to anything I've seen before, its monstrous height
extending towards the heavens shrouded in aphotic clouds. The Gothic
architecture mimicking the malignant carpet that was beneath my feet
as it became obvious that an unearthed cemetery was what I was
standing upon. An overwhelming sense of dread fell upon my shivering
body as the rapid palpitations acoustically illuminated the menacing
surroundings. Before I could evaluate why I was in this ghastly
predicament, a malevolent groan erupted from below, catalysing the
instinct to seek the safety of the Church. Running frantically
towards the confines of the Church, refusing to look back for the
source of the utterance, the crunching of the corpses below eerily
pierce my ears as I reach the deteriorating doors, the aegis that
protects the mysterious interior.
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